
Photo: Martin Birkin, “Dandelion 1″
Dark! Dark!
Do you feel that?
It’s my hand pulling you forward,
Through the dark tunnel of a lost cause,
Where time of your life was already spent.
“Come on! You can do it!”
Do you hear that?
It’s the voice of faith,
Your voice that merges with others,
Me, you, walking the tunnel.
You’re dragging your feet…..
Does it ever end?
Tough! Isn’t it?
Life is tough.
You feel in the holes, you jumped into some,
You crawled through mud chasing your dreams.
Are you tired?
Has your mind and body gave in,
In your organized preparation,
To become who you really want to be?
“Where are we going?” you ask the others,
Walking, crawling through the tunnel,
Next to you.
“We are walking out, keep going!”
And one by one, people come out,
Returning to sunshine and a sky with no clouds,
Returning to the innocence of roaming through the fields,
To the dandelions,
Waiting to make all dreams and desires come true.
And so they pick another dandelion,
Wishing in their hearts, and believing that their wish will come true.
Note: Life is a journey, and there are many dark tunnels. It is tough, but I believe that the beauty of the human spirit lies in our hopes and dreams. Keep listening to the whispers of your hopes, keep chasing your dreams, no darkness lasts forever.
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Exceptional poem. It swings from dark to light beautifully. Bravo.
xoxo
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Thank you so much G!!!
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My pleasure Andrada. You touched my heart. Enjoy the rest of your day,
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❤️❤️
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Truly beautiful Andrada and have lovely day 🍁
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Thank you, you too!
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“Dark tunnel of a lost cause” beautiful Andrada
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Nice blog
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Thank you Kate ❤️
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Thank you !
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My pleasure, followed you 💕
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❤️
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So inspiring🍡
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Awesomeeeee!
{hugs❤️}
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It’s a great piece of art!
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Great 👍
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Andrada, mesmerizing imagery weaves its way through darkness to the light. Beautifully penned!
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Thank you ❤️
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A very sincere pleasure!
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Beautiful and deep.
Thank you for sharing your inner thoughts
JJ
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Thank you so much !
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