The theme for this month for Free Verse Revolution is “Reflections”. Reflections could mean anything, from reflections in the mirror, water….to anything that you think it could be related with reflections.
For me, it was …the following poem.
You can read it at Free Verse Revolution if you click here. If you are a poet, I encourage you to submit some of your poetry to this blog, as I think it is a wonderful way of sharing our work.
Canvas
A house with white walls
And spell-binding shades,
A place of eternal youth,
Where love slips through the windows’ cracks
And warms the quiet air of night.
The door is open,
Tracks of mud from the garden,
Lead the way to a green tree,
The place of original sin.
We ate its apples to the core
And now it’s budding white blossoms,
The color of our dreams.
The blue night sky is meditating in silence,
You catch a falling star and keep it in your pocket,
Its bright and yellow light caresses your face and mine.
I lay my head on your chest
And trace with my fingers the vowels of love.
My paint coated fingers are trembling.
White, green, and blue,
Touches of tints and tones,
Reflect the shape of my thoughts on the canvas.
It was early this summer when I lost you,
I ran my fingers against the coffin’s glass
That locked you in…
My painted coated fingers are trembling.
White, green, and blue,
Touches of tints and tones,
Reflect the colors of my eternity with you.
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Unsettlingly beautiful!
Such innocence until the word coffin breaks it all up. I loved it!
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Thank you Zoe❤️
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Beautiful Andrada. Congratulations! For some reason I cannot leave a comment on FVR site so I am leaving here.
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Thank you so much G! I always appreciate your kind words and insights!
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My pleasure. Have a great weekend 🌹
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You too❤️
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Something about this Andrada ❤
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❤️
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Canvas is indeed beautiful, Andrada, embroidered with poignant thoughts.
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Thank you!!
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Beautifully written, thoughtful message and I love the atmosphere created💜
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Thank you !🌸
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from the tree
you and me
cast out
to mortal coil
to return to ocher soil
the blame
is in the name
a finger pointing
outward
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❤️
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Yes – I like this – I believe in it. Good atmosphere.
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Me too❤️
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